tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2453297448266538959.post985231510268236104..comments2023-07-19T13:38:29.174+01:00Comments on Seekin' the Cause: Why?Alessandrohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01082368983187148610noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2453297448266538959.post-49083978263797553102009-10-27T05:52:04.936+00:002009-10-27T05:52:04.936+00:00This is a good example of where the rhyme scheme h...This is a good example of where the rhyme scheme hurts an otherwise good poem. It lends a plodding pace to the poem, especially apparent in the last two stanzas.Gabriel Gadflyhttp://gabrielgadfly.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2453297448266538959.post-18239252001700059962009-10-13T18:37:22.994+01:002009-10-13T18:37:22.994+01:00Absolutamente de acordo.
BeijosAbsolutamente de acordo.<br /><br />Beijosruth ministrohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09913453972845490561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2453297448266538959.post-74813385382985623072009-10-04T01:55:29.665+01:002009-10-04T01:55:29.665+01:00So good!!!So good!!!Melissa Hinckley Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00550121631869651109noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2453297448266538959.post-62644526166669472772009-09-29T23:10:02.476+01:002009-09-29T23:10:02.476+01:00Hi, I have liked here... it is very nice... i will...Hi, I have liked here... it is very nice... i will be back... kissPoetic Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03256016119662485998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2453297448266538959.post-27635090171664318032009-09-29T20:52:04.011+01:002009-09-29T20:52:04.011+01:00Fazia tanto tempo que não lia uma poesia...Fazia tanto tempo que não lia uma poesia...Srta.Formigahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02999300736356131571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2453297448266538959.post-79224782443492536142009-09-28T16:20:52.459+01:002009-09-28T16:20:52.459+01:00Adorei. É inquietante!Adorei. É inquietante!Cathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07638360723001930003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2453297448266538959.post-52369951522776836802009-09-28T12:40:51.404+01:002009-09-28T12:40:51.404+01:00Gostei muito, muito muito. Ter alguém a nosso lado...Gostei muito, muito muito. Ter alguém a nosso lado é uma optima razao para viver.S*https://www.blogger.com/profile/17482032885928485410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2453297448266538959.post-67929577636941662612009-09-28T06:02:17.030+01:002009-09-28T06:02:17.030+01:00Some have tried the cloak of glory
Some have dres...Some have tried the cloak of glory<br /><br />Some have dressed the face of shame,<br /><br />Some have died, but live forever,<br /><br />while others lived without a name.<br /><br />Love this chunk of poem!Lord, I want to be wholehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17934276738709840183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2453297448266538959.post-81626903058799262282009-09-28T02:48:24.109+01:002009-09-28T02:48:24.109+01:00I like the thought of "how we live our why&qu...I like the thought of "how we live our why" lovely line.Tanyahttp://tanyahall.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2453297448266538959.post-76252441307752220882009-09-27T10:23:06.237+01:002009-09-27T10:23:06.237+01:00yeah.what a wonderful poem. keep up the spirit an...yeah.what a wonderful poem. keep up the spirit and push your limit.<br /><br />please come to my blog at http://warungaudionline.blogspot.comakaparanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03300757003230748194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2453297448266538959.post-41317889435942385342009-09-26T19:11:23.942+01:002009-09-26T19:11:23.942+01:00Amazing poem! Especially this: 'It is how we l...Amazing poem! Especially this: 'It is how we live our why'.<br /><br />Well, actually the whole last part is really very good. Not just what it says, but also the rhythm. I really like the sound of it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00858700462507596670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2453297448266538959.post-72703743962199997612009-09-26T03:41:36.301+01:002009-09-26T03:41:36.301+01:00What a wonderful poem. Thank you so much for shari...What a wonderful poem. Thank you so much for sharing it and BTW I do share the sentiment you expressed as well.timethiefhttp://thistimethisspace.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2453297448266538959.post-48565967943354182062009-09-25T22:16:53.955+01:002009-09-25T22:16:53.955+01:00...in this world, they often shatter.
Coping with......in this world, they often shatter.<br /><br />Coping with this, does it matter? You, an artist, express this clearly and beautifully.<br /><br />It is the plight of all. Confronting this plight - creatively - is our salvation.Ralph Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07937135000344065468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2453297448266538959.post-28302571187741990852009-09-25T17:13:19.888+01:002009-09-25T17:13:19.888+01:00This is beautiful... absolutely beautifulThis is beautiful... absolutely beautifulMz. Morehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04748549755610810398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2453297448266538959.post-81865534136014274472009-09-25T15:27:38.193+01:002009-09-25T15:27:38.193+01:00Very nice, Alessandro. Simple and poignant.
Love...Very nice, Alessandro. Simple and poignant.<br /><br />Love the photograph, too.Nothing Profoundhttp://wwwaphorismscom.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2453297448266538959.post-14888434755053207892009-09-25T15:06:21.032+01:002009-09-25T15:06:21.032+01:00..i like your poems and your point on it..maybe im.....i like your poems and your point on it..maybe im one of those who lives without a name and will die without a name..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com